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Some Dialogue and scene for some gangster flick . . . ” The Sicilian “

Thursday, July 15th, 2010

The Sicilian in conversation, seated at a coffee shop talking to an accountant.

The Sicilian in the Sicilian takes a  sip from his coffee and places it down on the saucer in a steal cold stare, but with a humble subtle smile, at the accountant seated across him -)

" where I come from, if some one gets shot, robbed, stabbed, whatever, no body saw nothing. No one goes to the police, its no ones business . . . where I come from all the people with your english mentality . . . all of you would be dead and it still wouldn't be any ones business, capisca ? Bene. "

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Some Dialogue and scene for some gangster flick . . .

Wednesday, June 23rd, 2010

Scene # [ TBA ]  | Title : The Heart Break

Cam. Action [ center to Don ]

The Don, seated in his chair, intimidating the person ( TBA ) in a coy manner

The Don

" It's not in my nature to forgive, however I do try and give everyone three chances. After that you name gets written in my black book. However if you break my heart "

Looking sympathetically down to the person

Cam.Action [ Cut to to show the person seated with a expression of fear on their face ]

Cam.Action [ Cut back to the Don]

" Then you have already nailed down your coffin "

Cam.Action
[ Zoom to Don ]

Exhales the cigarette and taps the ashes into the ash tray

" There is no redemption for you actions in this life anymore. I envy your freedom.

Cam.Action
[ Zoom out - slowly ]

The don produces as luger with a silencer from below the desk and loads it and points it to the person

Click Clack. Bang.

The person recoils back and slumps in the chair,
Cam.
Action [ camera pan from forehead down trail of blood, dripping on the carpet ( Sound effect  - Tapping of dripping blood )
( Sound effect  - The pinging ring of the of the gun echoes in the sound of silence thereafter. )

Cam.Action [ cut and Zoom to Don ]

The Don shoots the person in cold blood and places the pistol on the table, he produces another cigarette and lights it with a zippo  lighter,
he taps rhythmically on the table top as he contemplates something by looking blankly in the distance. Unnerved, unflinching and calm, it doesn't appear to the audience that the Don has just killed someone in cold blood, he is like an executioner who will go home and sleep peacefully, for
killing is just a job for him. ( This is the communication the direction must attain and communicate to the audience ).
The Don exhales a cloud of smoke and looks down on the table, reaching for the ashtray.

Scene Transition [ Fade out ]


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